When I was 10 years old, I play with my dog. She suddenly ran to the driveway. She had to traffic accident. She was die two days later. I was cry so much. One of the saddest memories I have of my childhood happend when i was 10 years old.
I had a similar experience when I was young. We just got a new puppy and he was trying to get into the car when my grandfather made a mistake and closed the door. He got caught in the door and died after that. We were really sad but my grandfather came home with a new dog a week later. It was the same kind of dog but his character was different. Anyhow, it was our first lesson in life and death.
Here are some tips.
1. Your TS is at the end of your paragraph.
2. "I was playing with my dog when she suddenly ran out into the road."
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What a shame! I understand your mind. Because I had a similar experience. Now, Do you have a pet dog?
I had a similar experience when I was young. We just got a new puppy and he was trying to get into the car when my grandfather made a mistake and closed the door. He got caught in the door and died after that. We were really sad but my grandfather came home with a new dog a week later. It was the same kind of dog but his character was different. Anyhow, it was our first lesson in life and death.
Here are some tips.
1. Your TS is at the end of your paragraph.
2. "I was playing with my dog when she suddenly ran out into the road."
3. "She died.."
4. "I cried a lot."
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